interesting. but i have some criticism, if you dont mind.
1. e is a good container, pi is so-so, li is not good, it is not expressive. try to make it more beautiful, as beautiful as e is
2. to me, tan and lon are too similar, especially when they are containers. it is difficult to read, perhaps i need more practice.
3. could you please show o as a container?
4. when you write mi awen ala awen, why the gliphs are arranged clockwise? isnt it contrary to you rules?
5. why la is not a container?
6. to me, it is quite hard to understand the motivation of american people, but the usage of TV show dialogues as an exapmple is probably not the best idea
but despite all this criticism, i have to say this is a good job. i was thinking about a writing system of such type, but my progress is far not that good.