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sitelen ni li moku akesi ike pi poki awen.

sitelen ni li ike.

sitelen ni li sitelen pi mute kama li kepeken ala li esun wile ala.

mi wile e ni: sitelen li moli li kama ala.

janMato wrote:sitelen ni li moku akesi ike pi poki awen.

sitelen ni li ike.

sitelen ni li sitelen pi mute kama li kepeken ala li esun wile ala.

mi wile e ni: sitelen li moli li kama ala.

I get the emotion, but miss some of the lines (delightful looking as they are).
"This writing is bad toad food of the continuing pocket
This writing is bad (no problems)
This writing is writing of future multitudes and is useless and is not a desirable market.
I wish that this writing die and not come. (no problems, but maybe a 'sin' at the end)

janMato wrote:sitelen ni li moku akesi ike pi poki kiwen.-- this writing is evil vile-animal meat of the metal box. Spam. (Darn minimal pairs!)
sitelen ni li sitelen pi kama sin mute li kepeken ala li esun wile ala. -- this writing comes over & over again, is useless and is unwanted marketing. (new word order)
mi wile e ni: sitelen li moli li kama ala sin.

janKipo wrote:I get the emotion, but miss some of the lines (delightful looking as they are).
"This writing is bad toad food of the continuing pocket
This writing is writing of future multitudes and is useless and is not a desirable market.
I wish that this writing die and not come. (no problems, but maybe a 'sin' at the end)

market -> marketing? I guess the English took a noun, used it as a verb (to market) and then turned it back into a noun again (the marketing).

Nice!