A few haikus

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Re: A few haikus

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Actually 'kon insa seli'. The other could be just central heating.
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Checking for publication:
Same problem with
'kiwen lon insa
pi ma tomo li tawa
li kiwen ala.'
But this seems more intractable. Best I could manage was
lon ma tomo la
kiwen insa li tawa
li kiwen ala.
Back to you.
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Re: A few haikus

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I don't agree that central heating would be one of the most central meanings.
It is better though to identify place first and later the state (however it may be a little of SAE influence). Maybe that's why it seems better style for me: "kon insa seli". Thanks.

I'm thinking of the improvement of the "kiwen" thing now. By the way, it's a somewhat personal wordplay around my name.
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Re: A few haikus

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"kiwen pi insa
pi ma tomo li tawa"

Greek for "kiwen" and old German etymology "pi insa pi ma tomo" (in the modern one it would be inverted)
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Edited. Ok with me.
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Sorry to be slow about the wordplay. I haven't yet gotten the tp name -- name connection down in most cases, so I don't see 'Pilo' and think "Pyotr Mittelstaedt" (Not sure I would have gotten it even if I had, but it is nice to have an excuse).
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Re: A few haikus

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janKipo wrote:Sorry to be slow about the wordplay. I haven't yet gotten the tp name -- name connection down in most cases, so I don't see 'Pilo' and think "Pyotr Mittelstaedt" (Not sure I would have gotten it even if I had, but it is nice to have an excuse).
No problem. I haven't even expected anyone to investigate into the puzzle, even after my hints.
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