tenpo sike suno pini mute la...

[jan Lika]

tenpo sike suno pini mute la, mi sitelen e toki pi toki pona; en ona li pona tawa mi.
tenpo suno pini mute la, mi kama sona e toki ni: toki pi pona mute!
tenpo suno no la, mi toki tawa sina.

toki.

mi tan ma Nosiki. tenpo ni la sina sona!

[KNTRO]

o jan Lika, o kama sona a!

tenpo sike suno pini la, mi kama sona e toki pona. mi kama sona e toki pona lon tenpo mun wan. toki pona li e toki pona mute tawa kama sona.

ma Nosiki li ma pona mute a!

[janKipo]

kama pona!

tenpo sike suno pini mute la, mi sitelen e toki pi toki pona; [en] ona li pona tawa mi. No ‘en’ between sentences
tenpo suno pini mute la, mi kama sona e toki ni: toki pi pona mute! No clear: ”I learned this language, a very good one”. Could just say ‘mi kama sona e toki ni pi pona mute’. Or “I learned this message: the language is very good” ‘mi kama sona e toki ni: toki li ponaa mute.”
tenpo suno nI la, mi toki tawa sina.

toki. Prob should go at the beginning.

mi tan ma Nosiki. tenpo ni la sina sona!

[janKipo]

[quote="KNTRO”][o jan Lika, o kama sona a!] 'jan Lika o,’ Prob ‘kama pona’ or did you mean “Learn!”?

tenpo sike suno pini la, mi kama sona e toki pona. mi kama sona e toki pona lon tenpo mun wan. toki pona li [e] toki PI pona mute PI tawa kama sona.

ma Nosiki li ma pona mute a! [/quote]

[jan Lika]

tenpo suno pini mute la, mi kama sona e toki ni: toki pi pona mute! No clear: ”I learned this language, a very good one”. Could just say ‘mi kama sona e toki ni pi pona mute’. Or “I learned this message: the language is very good” ‘mi kama sona e toki ni: toki li ponaa mute.”

I wanted to say I learned toki pona, but with a little pun of sorts: instead of saying "language of good", I wanted to say "language of very good"!

toki. Prob should go at the beginning.

I am very particular with my word choises and where I put them, and this placement was intented
(It is connected with the "now I am talking to you")

[janTepanNetaPelin]

tenpo sike suno pini mute la, mi sitelen e toki pi toki pona; en ona li pona tawa mi.
tenpo suno pini mute la, mi kama sona e toki ni: toki pi pona mute!
tenpo suno no la, mi toki tawa sina.

toki.

mi tan ma Nosiki. tenpo ni la sina sona!

toki, jan Lika o!

kama pona!

mi kama sona e toki pona lon sike suno mute pini.

mi tawa. awen pona!

jan Tepan