Mi sin tawa kulupu ni

[JanNasaPiKamaSin]

Toki, ali (hi, everyone). Tenpo lili la mi kama sona e toki pona (Ive only been learning Toki Pona a short time). Mi Jan Tese (Im Chase). Mi kama tan ma kalipona (Im from California). Mi wile kama sona e mute (I hope to learn a lot)

[janKipo]

'jan ali o, toki! tenpo ... mi jan... mi kama ta ma lili Kaliponija. mi wile ...' Vocatives first, no capital letters except on unofficial word (proper names). ante la pona.
kama pona tawa toki pona. sina sitilen e mute la sina kama sona e mute.

[JanNasaPiKamaSin]

Pona la sina pona e sitelen mi! (thanks for improving my writing)

[janKipo]

ken la 'pona tawa ni: sina pona...' 'pona la' = "fortunately, happily" pali ni li pona tawa mi.