jan ale o, toki! nimi mi li Pinsen. mi kama tan ma Netelan. mi pakala e toki kepeken toki pona la sina mute o toki e ni tawa mi

Hello everyone! My name is Vincent. I'm from the Netherlands. Please tell me if I make any mistakes in my Toki Pona

mi sona ala e ijo pi mute lili. taso mi toki e ni lon lipu pi nimi ni: kama sona toki.
There are a few things I don't understand, but I'll discuss these on the board "kama sona toki".
sina toki tawa mi la mi pilin pona!
I'd be glad for you to talk to me!