sina pilin e ni: mi pali e seme tan ni?

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janRyan
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sina pilin e ni: mi pali e seme tan ni?

Post by janRyan »

mi jo e jan pona mute. mute pi jan pona mi li meli. tenpo 14 anu 15 anu 16 la mi mute li sike e suno. tenpo suno pini la tomo pi pana sona mi li jo e tawa musi (dance). mi mute li lon tawa musi ni la wan tu pi jan pona mi li nasa tan telo nasa. ona mute li jan Ewin li jan Awisa li jan Puwitani. jan Ewin li tawa tawa musi ni poka mi. tenpo pini la mi toki e ni tawa jan Ewin: "mi wile e ni: o moku ala e telo nasa. tenpo 16 sina sike e suno. jan pi pana sona mi li lukin e sina nasa la sina li pakala mute. sina moku e telo nasa la mi ken ala e ni: sina tawa musi poka mi." jan Ewin li toki e ni: "tenpo kama lili la mi moku ala e telo nasa. ni li lon."

kin la ona mute li nasa tan telo nasa. jan Ewin li pana e telo nasa tawa jan pona ante mi. jan Ewin li nasa lili. jan Puwitani li nasa mute. jan Awisa li nasa. jan Awisa li toki e ni: "a a a! a a a! a a a!" jan Awisa li pini ala. taso jan Puwitani li nasa mute! ona li tawa musi nasa. tenpo pini la ona li ken ala tawa. mi pakala: jan Puwitani li ken tawa. tenpo suno pini la ona li tawa sama jan nasa. jan Ewin li toki e toki lon ala tawa mi.

jan Ewin li pakala. tenpo ni la ona li ike lili tawa mi. mi wile toki e ni tawa ona: "pakala! seme li pakala sina?! jan pi pana sona mi li lukin e sina mute la ona mute li toki ike pi sina mute tawa mama sina! sina moku e telo nasa tan seme?! mi toki tawa sina: 'o moku /ala/ e telo nasa! sina li ike lili tawa mi.'"

taso mi monsuta tan ni: mi wile ala e ni: mi li ike tawa ona. mi wile e ni: jan Ewin li jan pona pi mi. taso mi wile e ni: ona li pona. ike la jan Ewin li ante. ona li sama ala jan Ewin lon tenpo pini.

a! mi wile sona e ni: sina mute li pilin e seme tan toki ni? sina wile e ni: mi toki e seme tawa jan Ewin tan ni: ona li toki e toki ala tawa mi. pona!
Mako
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Re: sina pilin e ni: mi pali e seme tan ni?

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pona! sina toki pona e ike sina. mi wile kepeken e sona pi sike suno mi tawa pona sina.
janKipo
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Re: sina pilin e ni: mi pali e seme tan ni?

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pona mute. taso
maybe 'jan pona mi wan tu; it is the friends who get drunk, not the number three.
tenpo 16 la sina....
I guess the idiom "see you drunk" carries over:: "see a drunken you". Pedantically I would have done 'lukin e ni: sina nasa' "see that you are drunk"
'mi ken ala e ni' "I do not enable this" or, just possibly, "I can destroy this" Neither seems likely in the context, which seems to say something about consequences for the date -- or you.
tenpo pini la ona li ken ala tawa 'tenpo pini' goes back before the time you've gotten to in the story. I suppose you want 'ni pini la' "after the event just described"
/ala/ = 'ala kin' probably
'pakala' for "problem" in this sense seems strong, but I can't think of a better. ('ike' maybe)
jan Ewin li jan pona mi ('pi' requires two words after it -- enough to make a group)
jan Ewin pi tenpo pini (the use of 'lon' with time words is still controversial and this does the trick)
don't need 'e toki' between 'toki' and 'tawa mi'

ni ali li tan pana sona pi sina ala. ni li suli ala.
After three marriages (well, after two and well into three) , I may not be a good one to give advice -- although no one left because they were mad at me (sick of me, maybe). But continue to treat as before, with just a slight bit more distance (no PDA, say). Maybe she will realize it's mainly her fault and apologize in some way (keep an eye out, it may be subtle) or maybe she will continue to blame you. In that case, pull away. [Not responsible for any consequences of this advise to any person other than myself]
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