vere vere semper itaque.Mako wrote:Semper aliquid corrigendum!
Could use a 'taso' here and there, mainly after 'toki Lasina' Do you mean 'toki e toki ante' to mean "talk ABOUT another language" or do you mean "talk IN another language" The latter has been established already, the former maybe isn't best expressed this way (though maybe it is).mi pini ante e toki mute mi.
mi sona e ni: tenpo ni la mi pali e toki mute lili. tenpo suno kama la mi tawa ma tomo Lesiton. mil mute li toki wan kepeken toki Lasina. mi ken ala toki kepeken toki ante. tempo esun la mi ken ala toki e toki ante. mi ken toki kepeken toki Lasina.
maybe 'kulupu pi toki Lasina': ther are maybe some fine differences involved, but we don't know what they are yet.taso.
mi pini tawa tomo mi tan kulupu toki Lasina. telo lili li lon kon li ma tomo Lesiton. tenpo ni la mi lon telo suli. mi e mije sama pali lon ma ni.
I don't think a little water is the city of Lexington, as you say. Do you mean 'en' in place of 'li' Water is in the air and in the city of Lexington"? You surely mean 'en' for 'e' in the subject of the next sentence, which needs a 'li' somewhere: is it me and my working brother are in this country or me and my brother are working in this country?
Maybe 'tenpo pi tomo sona li kama', "When school time comes" 'mi pini olin e ona' o0r is there a distinction you are trying to make?mi wile kama sona e toki Epalanto. tempo tomo sona kama la mi jo jan pona. mi pini jo e olin lili tawa ona. tempo ni la mi jo ala e olin. ona li jo e jan pona li sona e toki Epelanto. tempo kama lili la mi wile lukin e ona kepeken tomo tawa kon. mi wile lukin e jan pona mi e jan pona ona.