Regarding the poem, I just used it to show what the syllabary looks like in actual use. I probably made some mistakes transcribing it. I have yet to become "fluent" in writing with this script. It was just a sample, just for visual purposes, not so much for accuracy.
Regarding my objectives, well, it was really quite pointless. I didn't really have an objective. Just for fun, I guess. Now that I look at it though, this syllabary is quite easy to learn, given the resemblances of the letters to the corresponding main consonant sounds as you would write them in the Latin alphabet and the relative regularity, just overall.