sitelen suwi

[jan Josan]

"kasi suli (lili-->mute) li lon ala ma mi."
"kin jan utala li lon nena pi kasi suli"
"jan (li) kama tawa kasi suli ni (li) wile pakala e ona (li) wile kama jo e ona"
("jan wawa" or "jan") (li) "utala e ona (li) moli e ona"

This is a fun puzzle. I can tell you're using the story of jan Kikamesi and it seems the bars separate the subjects from the predicates (in effect 'li'). But in this way I read it as the energetic man is fighting and killing (him), when I think (based on the original text) the "him" is referring back to the energetic man and the jan is doing the killing, so I'm not sure how to do the reading of the bars. Did I get the order right? Is this also in reference to janKipo's "sitlelen linja en sitelen supa"?

[jan-ante]

"kasi suli (lili-->mute) li lon ala ma mi."

kasi suli sama...

"kin jan utala li lon nena pi kasi suli"

taso jan wawa ... should be Kuwawa, but i have no "ku"

"jan (li) kama tawa kasi suli ni (li) wile pakala e ona (li) wile kama jo e ona"
("jan wawa" or "jan") (li) "utala e ona (li) moli e ona"

ol korekt. just insert la

Did I get the order right?

you were basically right, except la. i didnt use your la because i wanted something more simple and expressive.

Is this also in reference to janKipo's "sitlelen linja en sitelen supa"?

yes it is. but i have to confess i didnt read this topic of jan Kipo. as i am not a native speaker, his texts are a bit difficult for me

anyway, here is a more aestetical version of this sitelen

[jan Josan]

Here are the requested syllable glyphs in a powerpoint

Here is the updated word glyph set, with the head only of sama added and notes about containers at the end (jAnte I noticed you needed this for the Intenasijonale).

[jan Ote]

pona mute a!
I am waiting for lessons 6-12 on your site.
There is no sign for question mark in previous lessons or have I overseen it? no lesson with 'la' either?

[jan Josan]

pona mute a!
I am waiting for lessons 6-12 on your site.
There is no sign for question mark in previous lessons or have I overseen it? no lesson with 'la' either?

I've was waiting for the book to rewrite the lessons, but seeing that it still may be a while, I'll get back to filling in the missing chapters...
On the last page of the powerpoint with the word glyphs, there is a set of punctuation, including the question mark.

[jan-ante]

Here are the requested syllable glyphs in a powerpoint

Here is the updated word glyph set, with the head only of sama added and notes about containers at the end (jAnte I noticed you needed this for the Intenasijonale).

!lu~stsi@tosuIntenasijonale

[jan Josan]

!lu~stsi@tosuIntenasijonale

a! pona mute!
I would like to link to it from my website, if that is OK?

[jan-ante]

!lu~stsi@tosuIntenasijonale

a! pona mute!
I would like to link to it from my website, if that is OK?

ol korekt

[jan Josan]

New: chapter 6 on prepositions added to sitelen sitelen.

[jan Ote]

End of page, center: "mi wile e ni: mi tawa tomo mi." is painted with a container surrounding "tomo mi". Is it intentional?