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Toki Pona Forums • Seli lon telo
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Seli lon telo

Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 9:57 am
by aikidave
seli lon telo
tenpo pimeja pini la kulupu mama mi li tawa ma tomo Povites.
linja pi telo tawa li lon ma tomo ni.
jan musi li pana e ijo lon sewi linja pi telo tawa.
kasi kiwen li lon ijo ni.
jan musi li tawa ijo ni kepeken tomo tawa telo.
jan musi li pali e seli lon ijo ni.
seli tawa li suno e linja pi telo tawa.
jan musi li kalama e kalama musi.
kalama musi li pona tawa mi.
jan mute li kama tan ni: jan mute li lukin e seli.
jan mute lili li tawa insa tomo tawa telo.
jan musi li tawa e tomo tawa telo lon linja pi telo tawa.
seli lili li lon.
kulupu mama mi li lukin e seli lon telo.
ni li pona tawa mi.
mi pilin e ni: mi lon tenpo pini.

Comments, suggestions, corrections please. What I was trying to say is below:




fire on the water
Last night my family went to the city of Providence.
A river is in this city.
Artists put objects on top of the river.
Wood is in these objects.
The artists go to these objects using a boat.
The artists make fires on these objects.
The moving fires light up the river.
The artists play music.
The music was nice.
Many people come to watch the fires.
The artists give some people rides in the boats.
The weather was warm.
My family watched the fires on the water.
We liked this.
I felt like I was in times of old.

Re: Seli lon telo

Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 10:55 am
by janSilipu
Maybe 'kiwen kasi' "plant hard thing" rather than "hard plant"
Powiten?
Maybe just 'sell e ijo ni'
'telo linja' ?
'sell pi lon telo', fire, not looking, is on the water.
Nice!