right. neither marxist theory sais this. we can replace moli with anpa.jak Ote wrote:I prefer the second version, because the first says 'jan [...] li moli e jan mani'. In the original version there is no explicit killing...
li anpa moli tawa ma.
[in the future] all capitalists
will lie dead to the Earth?
done, in the 1st messageCould you please add punctuation to all stanzas?
jak Ote wrote:tenpo suno wan la (lawa/pipi) ike -- pipi?
li weka pakala tan ma.
I cannot understand the verb in the last verse. 'bad rulers will ... from Earth'. What does it mean: 'ona li weka pakala'? Cannot find any sense joining the verb 'to be absent' with a modifier 'pakala'.
mi pilin sama. There is no "li jo e kon" in original. The expression "li jo e ma e kon" reminds me of eschatology (they inherit earth and heaven or alike )...jan-ante wrote:to me, the last line is closer to original (Sera le genre humain) than "li jo e ma e kon". sina li pilin seme?
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