Seasons
- WasoPimeja
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Re: Seasons
Sure, if I can find a decent 5-syllable line for the rest of it, I'll make the whole thing 5-7-5 (even though the original has an irregular 9-syllable mid line).
ala li sin lon anpa suno. jan ala li ken toki e ni: 'o lukin! ni li sin a!' tan ni: ale li kama li tawa weka lon tenpo pini.- Eccl. 1.10
- WasoPimeja
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Re: Seasons
Hey, does this work?
kama lete la,
waso pimeja li lon
palisa moli
Using one of janTepanNetaPelins suggestions for autumn... I'm not too confident about what works and not when it comes to la-clauses. This is turning the content around a bit, I know, but I'm not averse to that if the result is good.
kama lete la,
waso pimeja li lon
palisa moli
Using one of janTepanNetaPelins suggestions for autumn... I'm not too confident about what works and not when it comes to la-clauses. This is turning the content around a bit, I know, but I'm not averse to that if the result is good.
ala li sin lon anpa suno. jan ala li ken toki e ni: 'o lukin! ni li sin a!' tan ni: ale li kama li tawa weka lon tenpo pini.- Eccl. 1.10
- WasoPimeja
- Posts: 37
- Joined: Tue Jul 17, 2018 2:24 pm
- Location: ma Nosiki
Re: Seasons
ala li sin lon anpa suno. jan ala li ken toki e ni: 'o lukin! ni li sin a!' tan ni: ale li kama li tawa weka lon tenpo pini.- Eccl. 1.10