I’d like to translate a short piece of Edda poetry to use as an example in my humble proposal for Elder Futhark runic transliteration for Toki Pona. Here’s one I liked from the Grimnismol:
Hot art thou, fire! | too fierce by far;
Get ye now gone, ye flames!
The mantle is burnt, | though I bear it aloft,
And the fire scorches the fur.
Here’s my inept attempt (I haven’t even finished a basic TP course yet):
seli o, sina seli! sina wawa mute!
sina o pini! seli o!
len li pakala seli. taso mi len e ni.
seli li seli kin e selo.
How can I fix it? :)