lon anpa pi suno mun

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lon anpa pi suno mun

Postby Sasin » Thu Oct 26, 2017 10:26 pm

«anpa pi suno mun la o tawa mi e ilo sitelen sina tawa ni: mi sitelen e nimi. palisa suno mi li ken ala pana e suno. mi jo ala e suno. o open e lupa tomo sina tawa mi a!»

anpa pi suno mun la jan Pijelo li toki e ni: «mi jo ala e ilo sitelen. mi lon supa lape. o tawa tomo pi jan poka mi. mi pilin e ni: meli li lon ni tan ni: insa pi tomo moku la jan li open e seli.»

anpa pi suno mun la mije pona Lupe li kalama luka lon lupa tomo pi meli pi linja mute pimeja lawa. meli li toki e ni: «jan seme li kalama luka?» mije li toki e ni: «o open e lupa tomo sina a!»

anpa pi suno mun la lukin pona li ken ala. lukin li tawa ilo sitelen li tawa suno. kepeken lukin mute ni la mi sona ala e ni: meli en mije li lukin e seme? taso mi sona e ni: lupa tomo pi open ala la ona tu li lon insa tomo.
ijo li mute li wan

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Re: lon anpa pi suno mun

Postby janKipo » Fri Oct 27, 2017 12:13 pm

Don't see the point of 'anpa pi'; '(lon) suno mun' seems enough.
I miss 'jan pona mi Peko o'
Don't need second 'tawa mi', but it is ok to have it -- or use 'pana' instead of 'tawa mi' as verb.
'moli' instead of 'ke pana ala e suno'
'mi jo ala e seli'
'tawa olin sewi' (joke coming up)
No sure how <<Peirrot>> sounds; I think I hear uvular /r/ so 'Peko' but it may just be a glide.
'toki sin e ni'. "replies"
The problem with independent sentences rather than subordinate clauses: 'tan ni' goes with 'pilin e ni' not with ' 'meli li lon ni' but I don't see how to fix it directly except by changing the order of the clauses: 'mi pilin e ni: insa pi tomo moku ona la jan li open e seli. tan ni la meli li lon' (Yuck, ptui!)
'Lupin'?
prob 'linja lawa pimeja mute'. (fussbudgetry)
'tawa sewi olin a!' (joke)
maybe 'kama lukin'
maybe 'lupa tomo li pini la' "when the door closes"

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Re: lon anpa pi suno mun

Postby Sasin » Fri Oct 27, 2017 12:32 pm

ante pona:

lon suno mun

«suno mun la o tawa mi e ilo sitelen sina tawa ni: mi sitelen e nimi. palisa suno mi li ken ala pana e suno. mi jo ala e suno. o open e lupa tomo sina tawa mi a!»

suno mun la jan Pijelo li toki e ni: «mi jo ala e ilo sitelen. mi lon supa lape. o tawa tomo pi jan poka mi. mi pilin e ni: meli li lon ni tan ni: insa pi tomo moku la jan li open e seli.»

suno mun la mije pona Lupe li kalama luka lon lupa tomo pi meli pi linja mute pimeja lawa. meli li toki e ni: «jan seme li kalama luka?» mije li toki e ni: «o open e lupa tomo sina a!»

suno mun la lukin pona li ken ala. lukin li tawa ilo sitelen li tawa suno. kepeken lukin mute ni la mi sona ala e ni: meli en mije li lukin e seme? taso mi sona e ni: lupa tomo pi open ala la ona tu li lon insa tomo.
ijo li mute li wan


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