soweli en ale

[ffuentes]

tenpo pini la mi pilin e ni: soweli li pilin ike la sina pilin ike. taso mi moku e soweli ante. ni li pakala. ni li ike!

mi pilin e ni: mi moku ala e soweli. taso mi pilin e ni kin: ni li pali mute. sijelo mi li wile e soweli moku. taso ni li lon ala

pilin ni li suli: ona mute li pilin e ni: jan pi moku ala e soweli li moku e kasi laso jelo taso. mi moku e moku mute e moku ante!

ni li pona tawa sijelo sina. ni li pona tawa lawa sina

sina pilin e seme?

[janKipo]

'jan pi moku ala e soweli' 'e' only occurs ina predicate and predicates don't occur in noun phrases, which this appears to be. If you shift a predicate over to modify a noun, all its components are reduced to modifier form (attached to the verb, with 'pi' if they are long), So 'jan li moku ala e soweli' becomes 'jan pi moku ala soweli'.
Who are the ona mute in line three? Only soweli seem available but they don't seem to fit the description.
Otherwise, an argument we all have from time to time.

[jan_Lope]

[janKipo]

That is half the problem. If it came after 'li' but still in an noun phrase, it would still be wrong.

[jan_Lope]

[jan Seli]

tenpo pini suli la mi moku e soweli. taso tenpo pini lili la mi moku ala e soweli. tenpo ni la mi moku lili e soweli sin.

lon li moku e moli. lon li ni. ni li lon. taso, sina ken moku lili e soweli la, o moku ala e soweli mute.

[janKipo]

prob 'moku sin lili' "eat a little again"

[ffuentes]

[ffuentes]

[jan_Lope]