sona pi akesi poki

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Mako
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sona pi akesi poki

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mi tawa lon ma. mi tawa e telo tawa tu. telo tawa tu li kama wan. mi lukin e ma insa lon insa pi telo tawa tu e selo pi akesi poki. selo li jo ala e sijelo lon insa ona. mi sona e ni: ona li moli tan seme? telo li tawa lon poki ale. akesi li ijo pi telo tawa! akesi li wile ala wile tawa ma anpa telo? mi sona e ni: mi ale li sona ala e nasin sama tawa tenpo kama.

I was walking in the country. I came to two streams. The streams became one. I saw an island between the streams and the shell of a turtle. The shell did not have a body inside it. I thought this: how did he die? The water was in every channel. Turtles are water creatures! Did the turtle want to go downstream? I thought this: we do not know our future paths.
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jan-ante
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Re: sona pi akesi poki

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Mako wrote:mi lukin e ma lon insa telo tawa tu
lon insa pi telo tawa tu
e poki pi akesi poki.
may be selo pi akesi poki?
akesi li soweli pi telo tawa!
snake is an aquatic mammal?
ma anpa telo
lower liquid ground/land. insert pi?
mi mute ale
just mi ale
e nasin sama tawa tenpo kama.
should you insert pi somewhere?
janKipo
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Re: sona pi akesi poki

Post by janKipo »

What Ante said.
Akesi and soweli are two different classes of critters, with no overlap: reptiles and amphibians v. land mammals.
'ma anpa telo' or maybe a 'lon' after 'ma'.
'nasin sama tawa tenpo kama'? "a path like future time travel"? But probably "our own path to the future" , the one remaining ambiguity in structure (well, no the only one but the last for a major component).
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