A few haikus

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Re: A few haikus

Postby janKipo » Sat May 28, 2016 8:52 am

Actually 'kon insa seli'. The other could be just central heating.

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Re: A few haikus

Postby janKipo » Wed Jun 01, 2016 12:24 pm

Checking for publication:
Same problem with
'kiwen lon insa
pi ma tomo li tawa
li kiwen ala.'
But this seems more intractable. Best I could manage was
lon ma tomo la
kiwen insa li tawa
li kiwen ala.
Back to you.

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Re: A few haikus

Postby jan Pilo » Wed Jun 01, 2016 12:42 pm

I don't agree that central heating would be one of the most central meanings.
It is better though to identify place first and later the state (however it may be a little of SAE influence). Maybe that's why it seems better style for me: "kon insa seli". Thanks.

I'm thinking of the improvement of the "kiwen" thing now. By the way, it's a somewhat personal wordplay around my name.
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Re: A few haikus

Postby jan Pilo » Wed Jun 01, 2016 2:02 pm

"kiwen pi insa
pi ma tomo li tawa"

Greek for "kiwen" and old German etymology "pi insa pi ma tomo" (in the modern one it would be inverted)
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Re: A few haikus

Postby jan Pilo » Wed Jun 01, 2016 2:53 pm

Edited. Ok with me.
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Re: A few haikus

Postby janKipo » Thu Jun 02, 2016 8:55 am

Sorry to be slow about the wordplay. I haven't yet gotten the tp name -- name connection down in most cases, so I don't see 'Pilo' and think "Pyotr Mittelstaedt" (Not sure I would have gotten it even if I had, but it is nice to have an excuse).

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Re: A few haikus

Postby jan Pilo » Sat Jun 04, 2016 10:14 am

janKipo wrote:Sorry to be slow about the wordplay. I haven't yet gotten the tp name -- name connection down in most cases, so I don't see 'Pilo' and think "Pyotr Mittelstaedt" (Not sure I would have gotten it even if I had, but it is nice to have an excuse).


No problem. I haven't even expected anyone to investigate into the puzzle, even after my hints.
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