jan pi sama sina

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jan pi sama sina

Postby jan_Pusa » Wed Apr 20, 2016 1:48 pm

tenpo pini la mi sona e ni:
mi ken lukin ala e jan pi sama sina
tenpo pini la mi sona e ni:
mi ken ala jo e olin sina

tenpo ni la mi lukin e ona
ona li jan pi sama sina
tenpo ni la mi en ona li jan pona
mi wile ala weka e sina

tenpo suno wan la mi tawa sina
"mi wile e ni: mi wan taso"
"mi pilin pona. mi jo ala e pakala"
"mi wile ala toki e ni"
ona li toki e ni la mi pilin ike
tan ni: pilin mi li pakala
Last edited by jan_Pusa on Fri Apr 22, 2016 4:46 pm, edited 4 times in total.
olin jan li ike la ni li pakala mute.
Kung ang mahalin ka ay bawal, ito'y napakasakit.

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Re: Otaku

Postby janKipo » Wed Apr 20, 2016 2:01 pm

last line, first verse 'mi ken ala jo...'? or 'jo e olin mi'? Otherwise, I don't quite understand.
Who is 'ona'? I've lost a thread here, it appears. another person?
Who is talking in verse three on each line - same or alternating and, if the latter, who starts?
Who is ona?

ante la pona a!

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Re: jan pi sama sina

Postby jan_Pusa » Wed Apr 20, 2016 2:21 pm

1. mi pona e ni.
2. "sina" is the ex I'm talking to. We're talking about "ona"
3. Same person.
4. "ona" is the person I've fallen for.
olin jan li ike la ni li pakala mute.
Kung ang mahalin ka ay bawal, ito'y napakasakit.

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Re: jan pi sama sina

Postby janKipo » Wed Apr 20, 2016 6:08 pm

pakala nasin. o sina kama tan ona li pakala ala mute.

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Re: jan pi sama sina

Postby jan_Pusa » Fri Apr 22, 2016 4:48 pm

seme? mi sona ala a.
olin jan li ike la ni li pakala mute.
Kung ang mahalin ka ay bawal, ito'y napakasakit.

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Re: jan pi sama sina

Postby janKipo » Fri Apr 22, 2016 6:15 pm

A classic problem. May you come out of it and not be hurt too bad.


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