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"mije wawa" pi sitelen tawa "Mulan" tan "Disuni"

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Re: "mije wawa" pi sitelen tawa "Mulan" tan "Disuni"

Postby jan Same » Sun Feb 26, 2017 10:58 am

Thanks for the corrections :)

Here are the things I've modified:
ni li sama pilin poka moli! - this feel’s like standing next to death!
mi wile ala e ni: ona li sona e lon - I don’t want him knowing the truth
o kama tawa lon nasin mi! ante la sina kama moli - Follow my path ! Or else you will die

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Here’s the final text :

kalama musi pi sitelen tawa Mulan - mije wawa

mi jo e nasin pi suli mute. - I have a long way to go!

mi mute o tawa ! mi mute li wile anpa e jan utala Une. - Let’s get started! We want to defeat the Hun army!
ona li pana e meli anu seme? taso mi wile jo e mije! - Did they give me girls? But I wanted men!
wawa sina li sama pipi - Your strengths are the same as insects
mi ante e tenpo kama sina - I will change your future
mi ken ante e sina tawa mije wawa - I can transform you into powerful men

o jo e awen pilin sama ma pi kasi suli, taso o seli lon insa - Have the tranquillity of a forest, but on fire within
sina kama pilin pona la, sina kama wawa sama monsuta - Once you feel at ease, you will become fierce like a monster
sina jo e wawa sama meli lili, sina sona e ijo ala - You have the strength of little girls, you don’t know anything
mi ken ante e sina tawa mije wawa - I can transform you into powerful men

ali ni li ike ali tawa mi - I don’t like this at all
moli li kama tawa mi - Death is coming for me
a! ijo utala ni li ike tawa mi - oh! I hate these war things
ni li sama pilin poka moli! - this feel’s like standing next to death!
mi wile ala e ni: ona li sona e lon - I don’t want him knowing the truth
mi tawa anpa lon telo la mi moli! - If I fall into the water I will die!

o tawa sama telo wawa (mije wawa!) - Be swift as a river (Powerful man!)
o kama sama kon utala (mije wawa!) - Become powerful as a storm (Powerful man!)
o pilin sama nena seli suli (mije wawa!) - Feel the same a big volcano (Powerful man!)
o kama lukin ala sama monsi pimeja mun! - Dissapear like the dark side of the moon! (Powerful man!)

mi mute jo e tenpo ala! jan Une li kama - We have no more time! The huns will arrive
o kama tawa lon nasin mi! ante la sina kama moli - Follow my path ! Or else you will die

utala li ike tawa sina la, o tawa tomo sina. mi ken ala ante e sina tawa mije wawa
If war is not for you, go home. I can’t transform you in a powerful man

o tawa sama telo wawa (mije wawa!) - Be swift as a river (Powerful man!)
o kama sama kon utala (mije wawa!) - Become powerful as a storm (Powerful man!)
o pilin sama nena seli suli (mije wawa!) - Feel the same a big volcano (Powerful man!)
o kama lukin ala sama monsi pimeja mun! - Dissapear like the dark side of the moon! (Powerful man!)

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Re: "mije wawa" pi sitelen tawa "Mulan" tan "Disuni"

Postby janKipo » Sun Feb 26, 2017 12:56 pm

As I said, ready for tomo lipu crew. But maybe not, since Disney tends to be very fussy about using its stuff in. any way without coughing up the green. We'll see.


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