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Sasin
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toki musi lili

Postby Sasin » Thu Jan 28, 2016 11:49 pm

ni li toki musi lili tawa jan lili. mi mama pi jan lili tu. tenpo mun la mi en jan pona mi li kalama e ni tawa ona. mi kalama lon tenpo pi poki telo. insa pi poki telo la sijelo jaki li kama jaki ala.

insa pi telo suli la kala kule mute li wan li jo e selo pona mute.
tenpo la kala laso lili li toki e ni: "sina wile ala wile pana e wan pi selo suno sina tawa mi?"
kala kule mute li toki e ni: "ala!"
kala ante li tawa weka tan ona. kala kule mute li wan.

ona li tawa lukin e kala luka mute li lukin kute e toki pona.
kala luka mute li toki e ni: "o pana e selo suno sina. nasin ni la sina jo ala e selo pona mute. taso sina pilin pona."
kala kule mute li toki e ni: "mi ken ala pali e ni!"

tenpo nanpa tu la kala laso lili li kama li toki e ni: "mi wile e wan pi selo suno sina. mi ken ala ken jo e wan?"
kala kule mute li toki e ni: ona li ken pana e wan lili taso tawa kala laso lili.
kala kule mute li pilin pona kin tan ni: kala laso lili li pilin pona kin. a!
ona li pana e selo suno ona tawa kala ante. taso ona li awen e wan.
ona li jo e kala pona kin.
kulupu kala tawa la ona li pilin pona mute a.
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ijo li mute li wan

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Re: toki musi lili

Postby jan_Lope » Fri Jan 29, 2016 3:37 am

Sasin wrote:
tenpo la kala laso lili toki e ni:


jan Sasin o, toki!
pona! taso ike lili li lon.

"tenpo la kala laso lili li toki e ni: "


BTW: Your profile
mi musi pi kalama - better: mi kalama musi.
ma Masasuse pi Mewika - better: ma Masasuse pi ma Mewika

Remember: after "pi" you need at least two words. Please see here:
http://rowa.giso.de/languages/toki-pona ... 0000000000
pona!
jan Lope
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Re: toki musi lili

Postby Sasin » Fri Jan 29, 2016 9:19 am

jan_Lope wrote:
Sasin wrote:
tenpo la kala laso lili toki e ni:


jan Sasin o, toki!
pona! taso ike lili li lon.

"tenpo la kala laso lili li toki e ni: "


BTW: Your profile
mi musi pi kalama - better: mi kalama musi.
ma Masasuse pi Mewika - better: ma Masasuse pi ma Mewika

Remember: after "pi" you need at least two words. Please see here:
http://rowa.giso.de/languages/toki-pona ... 0000000000


jan Lope o, toki!
a! mi ante e ni. pona!
ijo li mute li wan

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Re: toki musi lili

Postby jan_Lope » Sat Jan 30, 2016 6:29 am

ma Masasuse pi ma Mewika


toki!

Maybe better is it to say in two sentences:
"mi lon ma Masasuse. ni li lon ma Mewika."

Can I use your text in my lessons?

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Re: toki musi lili

Postby janKipo » Sat Jan 30, 2016 10:55 am

or even just 'lon ma (lili) Masasuse lon ma Mewika' The two sentences, while basic tp, seem overkill here.

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Re: toki musi lili

Postby Sasin » Sat Jan 30, 2016 1:05 pm

jan_Lope wrote:
Can I use your text in my lessons?

http://rowa.giso.de/languages/toki-pona ... 0000000000


sina ken.
la originan banlibron skribis Marcus Pfister. gxin mi tradukis.
mi sitelen e toki musi lili tan toki Inli. mi sitelen e ona tawa toki Epelanto. ona li pona tawa mi. mi sitelen e ona tawa toki pona. ona li pona mute tawa mi! ( :
ijo li mute li wan

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Re: toki musi lili

Postby jan_Lope » Sat Jan 30, 2016 1:52 pm

Sasin wrote:sina ken.


Jen ĝi.

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Re: toki musi lili

Postby Sasin » Sat Mar 19, 2016 9:20 pm

cxar mi scias pli bone lingvon Toki Pona, mi volas reskribi tiun cxi rakonton.
do jen reskribo.

insa pi telo suli la kala kule li wan li jo e selo pona mute.
tenpo la kala laso lili li toki e ni: "sina wile ala wile pana e wan pi selo suno sina tawa mi?"
kala kule li toki e ni: "ala!"
tan ni la kala ante ale li weka e ona. kala kule li wan.

ona li tawa kala pi luka mute tan ni: kala kule li wile kute e toki pona.
kala pi luka mute li toki e ni: "o pana e selo suno sina. nasin ni la sina jo ala e selo pona mute. taso sina pilin pona."
kala kule li toki e ni: "mi ken ala pali e ni!"

tenpo nanpa tu la kala laso lili li kama li toki e ni: "mi wile e wan pi selo suno sina. mi ken ala ken jo e wan?"
kala kule li toki e ni: ona li pana e wan lili taso tawa kala laso lili.
kala kule li pilin pona tan ni: kala laso lili li pilin pona. a!
kala kule li pana e selo suno ona tawa kala ante ale. taso ona li awen e wan.
tan ni la ona li jo e kala pona.
kulupu kala li tawa li musi la ona li pilin pona mute a.
ijo li mute li wan

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Re: toki musi lili

Postby janKipo » Sat Mar 19, 2016 10:00 pm

prob 'selo pi pona mute' (it doesn't have three skins)
'tenpo wan la'
fish with many hands? fins?.
Not sure I understand, but the grammar seems OK.


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