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pakala suli

Creativity: Poetry, music, comics, etc.
Kreado: Poezio, muziko, bildrakontoj, ktp.
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pakala suli

Postby janPeka » Tue Aug 11, 2015 10:13 am

seli li moku
e pona pi kon ali.
sewi li weka.

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Re: pakala suli

Postby janKipo » Tue Aug 11, 2015 11:27 am

No problems except interpretation.
Same goes for your motto,

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Re: pakala suli

Postby janAetherStar » Tue Aug 25, 2015 3:42 am

This is gorgeous! From what I take of it, fire is "consuming" all the air's oxygen, and so the sky dissipates/is not longer there. It feels a lot more poetic though. :) Toki Pona is better sometimes for things like these - I guess all languages have their quirks!
ale li pona. :)
sina o sona e ni.

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Re: pakala suli

Postby janPeka » Sun Sep 20, 2015 1:46 pm

thank you! :D


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