lon supa lape mi

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lon supa lape mi

Postby jan_Pusa » Thu May 07, 2015 11:41 am

mi wan taso lon supa lape mi
ijo lape lawa li lon poka mi
pilin mi li wile e jan
jan li ken pilin li pana e luka sike

luka mi li wile e sijelo
pilin mi li wile olin
telo oko li tawa lon pimeja
mi jo ala e jan lon poka mi.
Last edited by jan_Pusa on Fri May 08, 2015 6:51 am, edited 1 time in total.
olin jan li ike la ni li pakala mute.
Kung ang mahalin ka ay bawal, ito'y napakasakit.

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Re: lon supa lape mi

Postby janKipo » Thu May 07, 2015 1:38 pm

pona mute. mi ali li sona e pilin ni lon tenpo.
I would have said 'sike luka' rather than the other way around, but I don't see the difference.
I don't understand the 'li' in the last line; it makes more sense without it.


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