lipu li jo e kon

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jan_Pusa
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lipu li jo e kon

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lipu li lukin tawa mi
poka li lukin e pilin ike
lipu li pilin e ni:
mi ike tawa ona

lipu li weka e telo oko
ona li wile e pona
kon lipu li toki tawa mi
ike li lon pilin ni

toki wawa pi jan mute!
mi ken kute e kalama ona!
ona li utala e jan lawa ike!
telo loje pi jan mute li tawa
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olin jan li ike la ni li pakala mute.
Kung ang mahalin ka ay bawal, ito'y napakasakit.
janSilipu
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Re: lipu li jo e kon

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Pona mute. Mi sona ala e ona ali. Taso ona li pona.
Taso o weka e nimi 'pi' tan nimi 'kon pi lipu'. Sina wile Jo e nimi tu Lon monsi nimi 'pi'.
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Re: lipu li jo e kon

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*pali e toki musi* nimi pi? lon seme? a a!
jan Silipu o, pona

Quick backgrounder: I work with victim files. See:http://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/History_ ... 80%931986)
Sometimes it's as if the souls of the (dead) victims are are in the files, crying for justice from beyond the grave...
olin jan li ike la ni li pakala mute.
Kung ang mahalin ka ay bawal, ito'y napakasakit.
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Pona! Tenpo ni mi sona e toki sina. O kon pi jan pi lon lipu li Kama tawa pon.
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seme? You sound like you have a long way to go (grammar-wise). May I suggest you review 'la' and 'o'?
olin jan li ike la ni li pakala mute.
Kung ang mahalin ka ay bawal, ito'y napakasakit.
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lon! mi sitelen wawa li lukin lili.
'tenpo ni LA' 'tawa ponA'. taso nimi 'o' li pona . (optative, not imperative or vocative).
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optative? I don't remember 'o' working that way...
olin jan li ike la ni li pakala mute.
Kung ang mahalin ka ay bawal, ito'y napakasakit.
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Many examples through the years, admittedly mostly from me, but several from Sonja (including one in which she explained it to me when I questioned it).
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