nimi musi lili mi

Creativity: Poetry, music, comics, etc.
Kreado: Poezio, muziko, bildrakontoj, ktp.
janWikiWiki
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nimi musi lili mi

Postby janWikiWiki » Wed May 16, 2012 2:30 am

mi wile lukin.
mi wile pilin ali
mi wile sona

A short haiku for my first post on the boards. I love how so many layers of meaning can be expressed so simply with Toki Pona. It is beautiful simplicity.

jan-ante
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Re: nimi musi lili mi

Postby jan-ante » Tue May 22, 2012 9:20 am

janWikiWiki wrote:mi wile pilin ali
= i want (to) feel generally, so mi wile e pilin ale could be better, but to keep 5 7 5 one can do like this: mi wile e pilin sin

my turn:
mi wile sona
e ijo suli mute
lawa li seli


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