I think I've got the largest consolidated collection of pure tp texts in one place:http://tokipona.net/tp/CorpusReadability.aspx
If I were a paid editor, rather than a hobbyist that sometimes has free times and gets excessively interested in things, the I'd require contributors to:
1 Provide a parallel text at least chunked/matched up by paragraph, preferably by sentence, but that could make for some awkward English translations.
2 Provide a phrase glossary for any clever noun or verb phrases, or creative single word uses
3 Provide an interlinear gloss for any clever sentences.
Without out all that, an editor can't really decide how to fix whats wrong. And #3 is the most laborious, but would help the most in deciding if a clever construction is okay.