ma suno

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Ose
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ma suno

Postby Ose » Fri Jul 08, 2011 1:02 pm

mi pilin e suno. selo mi li pilin e suno.
suno li seli a! pilin seli li pona tawa mi.
mi lon ma suno.

taso mi lukin e ma ante. sewi li suno ala e ma ni.
mi lukin e pimeja. mi lukin e pimeja lon poka pi suno.
oko mi li telo
ma ni li pakala. taso
mi lon ma suno.

pimeja o pini! mi wile pini e pimeja. mi wile pana e suno.
mi wile e ni: suno li lon.
mi toki e ni: "o lon! o lon! a!"
taso mi ken ala pali lon e suno.
lawa mi li pimeja.
mi lukin ala. mi lukin e lon ala.
mi lon ma pimeja.
mi ken kepeken e toki pona e toki Kinla e toki Inli

janKipo
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Re: ma suno

Postby janKipo » Mon Jul 11, 2011 11:00 pm

'mi lukin e pimeja lon poka pi suno.' 'pi' needs two words after it, so just 'lon poka suno', but that means "beside the sun", while you want "in place of the sun", which would be literally 'lon lon suno', but I am not sure that really says what you want.
'mi ken ala pali lon e suno.' 'pali' is not "make" in that sense; use 'kama'

Ose
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Re: ma suno

Postby Ose » Tue Jul 12, 2011 1:14 pm

'mi lukin e pimeja lon poka pi suno.' 'pi' needs two words after it, so just 'lon poka suno'

Ah, schoolboy error. :oops: Thanks!
mi ken kepeken e toki pona e toki Kinla e toki Inli


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