nasin pi linja mute pi toki musi lili

[jan-ante]

or the garden of branching hokku

____________ pipi lili o!
____________ o sewi lili lili...
____________ nena Pusi a!

____________ nena Pusi a!
____________ mi pilin nasa pona
____________ tan sewi ona.

tan sewi ona _______________ tan sewi ona
li lon ma li lon sewi _________ li lon pimeja li lon
li lon insa mi ______________ walo suli kin.

"... li lon insa mi" __________ walo suli kin
seme li lon insa mi? _________ li ken kama pimeja.
mi sona ala. _______________ ale li ante.

the idea was taken from here: (use this: for particular example)

So i invite everybody to add a tp hokku to my sarting branch according these rules:
(1) 5-7-5 syllabic structure
(2) no semi-official words (pu, monsuta)
(3) proper names must be properly capitalised and tokiponised
(4) 1st or 3rd line of new hokku must be the same as 1st or 3rd some hokku from the garden, although the punctuation could be different

That could be a good experiment to see how the tp hokku could work in 5-7-5 structure.

[janKipo]

lipu ni li ante ala anta tawa toki Inli. ante la musi ni li musi mute. lipu pini la jan li sitelen e musi Ajaku kepeken toki pona. ken la jan li ken sitelen e musi sin tan musi ni.

[jan-ante]

[janKipo]

pakala! mi pakala mute kepeken nasin of jan ni: mi pona e sitelen pi jan ni. mi sona ala e toki Losi. tan ni la mi ken ala pana e musi Oku sin tawa lipu Losi. taso jan li sitelen e musi Ajaku mute lon lipu pi tenpo pini pi toki pona. mi ken pana e musi sin tawa lipu ni.

[jan-ante]

[jan-ante]

waso li tawa
li lukin e moku sin
pipi lili o!

[iulius]

[jan Misite]

[jan-ante]

[jan Kapiwe]

o kama sona
o pana e sona sin,
la sina pona.
_______________

mi lape pona
mi suli e lawa mi
mi lape nasa.