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by jan Pina
Wed Nov 02, 2016 8:51 am
Forum: kama sona toki
Topic: len lawa loje
Replies: 41
Views: 30958

Re: len lawa loje

jan Kipo o, toki! me pilin e ni: me pali e sona sin. toki inli "to pretend" li sama "to deceive" anu "to cheat". nasin ni la me ken toki e ni: "ike esun". toki ni li lukin pona tawa me. "pali e ike esun" anu "wile e ike esun" ni li pona sem...
by jan Pina
Mon Oct 31, 2016 10:27 am
Forum: ijo ante | miscellaneous | diversaj
Topic: как сказать "кровь" на тп? --> telo suno = blood
Replies: 31
Views: 40846

Re: как сказать "кровь" на тп? --> telo suno = blood

обычно слово "кровь" на тп записывают как "красная жидкость". А есть еще способ: кровь -- жидкость для сердца [/b] ... telo suno (blood -- liquid for heart) remark: suno = sun = (astrologically: sun, heart, glory, light...) I like it but... It is poetic and beautiful but very co...
by jan Pina
Mon Oct 31, 2016 9:29 am
Forum: kama sona toki
Topic: len lawa loje
Replies: 41
Views: 30958

Re: len lawa loje

I've done corrections.
Now starting to work on a part two of the story
Morale: ... kids are doing so wrong when speaking to strangers...
Here is one more question.
How do you say in TP . ... to pretend ...
by jan Pina
Sat Oct 29, 2016 11:26 pm
Forum: kama sona toki
Topic: len lawa loje
Replies: 41
Views: 30958

Re: len lawa loje

I've done almost all corrections you advised. At least I got what you mean when wrote "quote - unquote". Sorry it took me so long :( But here some places which are still unclear for me. >> 7 jan Ali li toki (usual plea about quotes for names of names) Not sure what you mean. I put quotes a...
by jan Pina
Fri Oct 28, 2016 2:32 pm
Forum: kama sona toki
Topic: Full and Empty
Replies: 19
Views: 13565

Re: Full and Empty

Me is new to Toki Pona so I have a fresh eye on it.

jo e ala - is pretty clear for newcomers like me. Means empty.
poki jo e ijo lon insa - not emty. It is not completely full but one may clarify it
ante li ken ala lon insa ona.
by jan Pina
Thu Oct 27, 2016 10:39 pm
Forum: kama sona toki
Topic: len lawa loje
Replies: 41
Views: 30958

Re: len lawa loje

pona! jan Kipo o! I edited previous post according to what you say. Did changed some things to clarify the text. hope it does clarify :) soweli li lon tenpo pini suli - soweli li jo e sike suno pini mute. jan kipisi kasi - jan pali kasi I'm not sure I've got all your directions right so some correct...
by jan Pina
Wed Oct 26, 2016 9:05 pm
Forum: kama sona toki
Topic: len lawa loje
Replies: 41
Views: 30958

Re: len lawa loje

Here is a kids friendly version. Comments and editorials are very welcome. Disclaimer: The version of a Little Red Riding Hood by Charles Perrault translated from english. The source is:http://www.sjsu.edu/faculty/harris/StudentProjects/Student_FairyTales/WebProject/Fairy%20Tales/little%20red%20ridi...
by jan Pina
Mon Oct 24, 2016 11:58 pm
Forum: kama sona toki
Topic: len lawa loje
Replies: 41
Views: 30958

Re: len lawa loje

Thank you for corrections.
I did edit previous post in order to save space.
Hope this time even less mistakes left.
by jan Pina
Mon Oct 24, 2016 12:29 am
Forum: kama sona toki
Topic: len lawa loje
Replies: 41
Views: 30958

Re: len lawa loje

Pona!

"... wile sike e sina ..." could be read as "want to rotate you" :)
so I'll go with "...wile jo e sina..."
by jan Pina
Sun Oct 23, 2016 10:21 pm
Forum: kama sona toki
Topic: len lawa loje
Replies: 41
Views: 30958

Re: len lawa loje

Thank you jan Alante. Thank you jan Kipo. Here is updated edition. Hope this time here would be less mistakes. :) ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- o kute e toki pi len lawa loje lili. tenpo suli pini la jan ...