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by jan_Pusa
Thu Feb 15, 2018 11:09 pm
Forum: musi
Topic: Desiderata in TP
Replies: 2
Views: 8871

Desiderata in TP

Hello!

Here is Desiderata, translated into TP and up for edits.

Here is the link:
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1iRZMd ... pUvpuy6gIQ

Constructive comments most appreciated.
by jan_Pusa
Tue Sep 19, 2017 11:08 am
Forum: musi
Topic: toki musi lili 17
Replies: 0
Views: 13758

toki musi lili 17

toki! My new book, toki musi lili 17 tan pilin pakala mi (17 Poems from My Broken Heart) is now available for download! I hope this will be a good read for anyone who is looking to practice their TP reading skills, or for anyone who can relate to the pain of losing someone. I worked on this with jan...
by jan_Pusa
Mon Sep 11, 2017 1:53 am
Forum: musi
Topic: monsuta lon mi
Replies: 5
Views: 10708

Re: monsuta lon mi

Hmm... I have resent the preface via PM. Please check your inbox again. pona!
by jan_Pusa
Sat Sep 09, 2017 4:22 am
Forum: musi
Topic: monsuta lon mi
Replies: 5
Views: 10708

Re: monsuta lon mi

Look like it needs some edits... I'll get back to it when I come back from my vacay/holiday. Btw, have you read my PM? I sent the preface for checking. Thanks!
by jan_Pusa
Thu Sep 07, 2017 11:22 pm
Forum: musi
Topic: monsuta lon mi
Replies: 5
Views: 10708

monsuta lon mi

NOTE: a non-Pu word is used for poetic reasons. I do not intend to write a Pu-compliant version. 9/11 2017: fixed a few lines that didn't make sense mi jo e monsuta monsuta li ali lon insa mi monsuta li jo e wile sama mi en sina taso wile ni li ike ni li sama jan ante monsuta li awen lon insa mi mo...
by jan_Pusa
Mon Sep 04, 2017 11:55 am
Forum: musi
Topic: Forgotten Poems
Replies: 1
Views: 8350

Forgotten Poems

I was cleaning out my tablet and found some unpublished TP poems. I thought I'd (finally) let them see the light of day... pana e olin mi pana e telo oko mi jo e olin lon pilin mi mi wile pana e olin taso jan ala li kama jo e ni ========== sina en mi sina lukin tawa mi mi lukin tawa sina pilin pona...
by jan_Pusa
Sun Aug 06, 2017 9:30 am
Forum: ijo ante | miscellaneous | diversaj
Topic: New batch of poems and...
Replies: 2
Views: 8923

Re: New batch of poems and...

Ok. Check your private messages on the forums for the link. If you don't see anything bad, let me know.
by jan_Pusa
Sat Aug 05, 2017 11:39 am
Forum: musi
Topic: ilo pi telo sewi (Rain Memoir v2)
Replies: 0
Views: 13076

ilo pi telo sewi (Rain Memoir v2)

Here is the second draft of the rain memoir from last year... ilo pi telo sewi mi lon tomo tawa suli la mi anpa e monsi mi tawa supa monsi. telo sewi li lon. ilo pi telo sewi pi jan pona mi li lon luka mi. mi lukin e ni la mi pilin e ni: jan pona mi li pana e ilo pi telo sewi tan seme? ona li jo e ...
by jan_Pusa
Sat Aug 05, 2017 6:59 am
Forum: ijo ante | miscellaneous | diversaj
Topic: New batch of poems and...
Replies: 2
Views: 8923

New batch of poems and...

Hi! It's been a while since I posted here... Anyway, I'm working on a new batch of poems and I would like one or two people (preferably experienced) to check the drafts for any typos/oversights and constructive comments. If interested, just let me know below. If you're good, I'll send the link (via ...
by jan_Pusa
Sat May 21, 2016 5:53 pm
Forum: musi
Topic: A memoir in TP
Replies: 1
Views: 3423

A memoir in TP

Title not final; subject to change mi lon tomo tawa suli la mi anpa e monsi mi tawa supa monsi. telo sewi li lon. ijo pi telo seli ona li lon luka mi. mi lukin e ni la mi pilin e ni: ona li pana e ijo pi telo sewi tan seme? ona li jo e pilin tawa mi? mi en ona li tawa lon nasin. ona li jo e len let...