Hello!
Here is Desiderata, translated into TP and up for edits.
Here is the link:
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1iRZMd ... pUvpuy6gIQ
Constructive comments most appreciated.
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- Thu Feb 15, 2018 11:09 pm
- Forum: musi
- Topic: Desiderata in TP
- Replies: 2
- Views: 9219
- Tue Sep 19, 2017 11:08 am
- Forum: musi
- Topic: toki musi lili 17
- Replies: 0
- Views: 14351
toki musi lili 17
toki! My new book, toki musi lili 17 tan pilin pakala mi (17 Poems from My Broken Heart) is now available for download! I hope this will be a good read for anyone who is looking to practice their TP reading skills, or for anyone who can relate to the pain of losing someone. I worked on this with jan...
- Mon Sep 11, 2017 1:53 am
- Forum: musi
- Topic: monsuta lon mi
- Replies: 5
- Views: 11102
Re: monsuta lon mi
Hmm... I have resent the preface via PM. Please check your inbox again. pona!
- Sat Sep 09, 2017 4:22 am
- Forum: musi
- Topic: monsuta lon mi
- Replies: 5
- Views: 11102
Re: monsuta lon mi
Look like it needs some edits... I'll get back to it when I come back from my vacay/holiday. Btw, have you read my PM? I sent the preface for checking. Thanks!
- Thu Sep 07, 2017 11:22 pm
- Forum: musi
- Topic: monsuta lon mi
- Replies: 5
- Views: 11102
monsuta lon mi
NOTE: a non-Pu word is used for poetic reasons. I do not intend to write a Pu-compliant version. 9/11 2017: fixed a few lines that didn't make sense mi jo e monsuta monsuta li ali lon insa mi monsuta li jo e wile sama mi en sina taso wile ni li ike ni li sama jan ante monsuta li awen lon insa mi mo...
- Mon Sep 04, 2017 11:55 am
- Forum: musi
- Topic: Forgotten Poems
- Replies: 1
- Views: 8626
Forgotten Poems
I was cleaning out my tablet and found some unpublished TP poems. I thought I'd (finally) let them see the light of day... pana e olin mi pana e telo oko mi jo e olin lon pilin mi mi wile pana e olin taso jan ala li kama jo e ni ========== sina en mi sina lukin tawa mi mi lukin tawa sina pilin pona...
- Sun Aug 06, 2017 9:30 am
- Forum: ijo ante | miscellaneous | diversaj
- Topic: New batch of poems and...
- Replies: 2
- Views: 9237
Re: New batch of poems and...
Ok. Check your private messages on the forums for the link. If you don't see anything bad, let me know.
- Sat Aug 05, 2017 11:39 am
- Forum: musi
- Topic: ilo pi telo sewi (Rain Memoir v2)
- Replies: 0
- Views: 13639
ilo pi telo sewi (Rain Memoir v2)
Here is the second draft of the rain memoir from last year... ilo pi telo sewi mi lon tomo tawa suli la mi anpa e monsi mi tawa supa monsi. telo sewi li lon. ilo pi telo sewi pi jan pona mi li lon luka mi. mi lukin e ni la mi pilin e ni: jan pona mi li pana e ilo pi telo sewi tan seme? ona li jo e ...
- Sat Aug 05, 2017 6:59 am
- Forum: ijo ante | miscellaneous | diversaj
- Topic: New batch of poems and...
- Replies: 2
- Views: 9237
New batch of poems and...
Hi! It's been a while since I posted here... Anyway, I'm working on a new batch of poems and I would like one or two people (preferably experienced) to check the drafts for any typos/oversights and constructive comments. If interested, just let me know below. If you're good, I'll send the link (via ...
- Sat May 21, 2016 5:53 pm
- Forum: musi
- Topic: A memoir in TP
- Replies: 1
- Views: 3562
A memoir in TP
Title not final; subject to change mi lon tomo tawa suli la mi anpa e monsi mi tawa supa monsi. telo sewi li lon. ijo pi telo seli ona li lon luka mi. mi lukin e ni la mi pilin e ni: ona li pana e ijo pi telo sewi tan seme? ona li jo e pilin tawa mi? mi en ona li tawa lon nasin. ona li jo e len let...